Dark World deck for tourney

so a tourney is coming up and uhh...i want to use my dark world build there
please do give comments and suggestions!

Monsters:
Grapha x3
Snow x3
Beiige x2
Broww x3
Brron x2
Fabled Raven x2
Sangan
Ryko x2
Battle Fader x1

Spells:
Gate to the Dark World x3
Dark World Dealings x1
Dragged Down ino the Grave x1
MST x2
Heavy Storm
Card Destruction
Dark Hole
Book of Moon
Dark World Lightning x2
Foolish Burial
Monster Reborn

Traps:
Solemn Warning x2
Solemn Judgement x1
Dimensional prison x2
Mirror Force
TT

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Minako wrote:

-2 ryko (no need to mill your cards
-1 fader
-1 dragged down into the grave
-1 book of moon
-2 mst (lighting and grapha do fine on there own)
-1 foolish burial
-2 dimensional prison
-1 mirror force
+2 dark world dealing
+2 pot of dueality
+2 mind crush
+2 trago
+3 tour guide

Most of your build isn't bad imo. However I think tour guide with some xyz action should be wonderful in here. She can fetch broww if she has too. Duality could give you some extra consitancy. Also I don't really see why you are using dragged instead of dark world dealing. With grapha and dark world lightening to pop things mst isn't that needed. Trago is much better than fader in Dark world for the very obvious reasons.

I usually run Dragged Down instead of Dealings because they might as well ditch Dandy or something to help them, but that way I can disrupt them just the way I want it. Also, I can very easily make my hand consist of only Dark World Monsters to give them only the choice of what of the bads to choose. As for Duality, I really wouldn't go with it, personally I Special Summon every turn, mainly Grapha. I agree with the rest of the fixes though.

What Vongy said. You really need to get tested Archmage. Locked until you do