Well dredor, I used to run a deck for a short while like this one and I named it my annoy-the-crap-out-of-your-opponent deck
. It was fun, but ultimately had no way to kill your opponent. While this one is a bit better than the one I made several years ago, but after facing it te other day I think it has the same problem as mine did. You held me off for quite a while but it just had no way to finish me off. So, I would propose an anti-meta deck like dimensional eatos or gadget stun, chaos stun maybe, something like that instead. Anti-meta have their own strategy while crippling the engines most often use by meta decks. (right now meta is using a graveyard a lot and special summoning like crazy). I can help you with anti-meta if you pick which one you want. If you want to keep this one, here's what you should do:
-1 big bang shot (I've found equip cards to be really inconsistent)
-1 united we stand
-1 swords of revealing light (not THAT good, but okay)
-1 lightning vortex (2 is too many)
-1 mystic swordsman (...)
-1 banisher of the light (uneeded)
+1 tragoedia (although you run 2 oppressions, he'll save your tail)
+1 gorz
+1 chaos sorceror
+2 dimensional prison (one of the better trap cards around these days. Kills stardust)
+1 my body as a shield (protection. Nuff said)
that should make it run a bit smoother, but like I said it's hard o actually kill your opponent only by stopping their strategy