1. Stop double posting
2. Reason why people aren't replying is because Zombies aren't competitive atm, so most of them have no clue what to drop/add. You also use too many suboptimal cards like Jerry Beans Man and commit fundamental deckbuilding flaws like running 50 cards in the main deck.
3. Don't expect people to spoonfeed you. Do your own research first. All people can do is give you some advice. The playtesting,research,learning rulings etc. has to be done by yourself. In fact, in YGO 99% of the work has to be done by yourself.
4. I googled some Zombie stuff real quick and found an article from Jeff Jones.
http://articles.alterealitygames.com/?p=18686I'd start out with his build.
we also have another zombie article written by Funchy on this site btw:
https://tdga.forumotion.com/t2678-blue-blooded-oniit's old, but certainly interesting.
I feel like Jones' build is the way to go.
5. Playtest with their decks(especially the Jeff Jones one) and post your new list here, so people can come up with advice.
Good Luck!