Yeah, no offense but it's pretty jumbled. You're trying to combine Hopeless/Disaster Dragon and Malefics. That doesn't really work too well. The competitive Malefics are Cyber End and Stardust. That's pretty much it. If you run the ones that make you run the original copy in the main deck, you risk dead drawing them. You thought of a good way to fix it with redmd, but it would be far easier to simply not have that problem in the first place. Cyber End is way better than bewd anyway. Your skeleton monster lineup should be
3 Malefic Cyber End
3 Malefic Stardust
3 Beast King Barbaros
1 Morphing Jar (optional)
for the field, I like Malefic World. But I think in a format with heavy storm and 3 mst, Geartown is the smarter choice. Even if you don't actually run Ancient Gear Gadjiltron Dragon, they will think you do and never mst Geartown. But ofc you want to run it, so add 3 Gadjiltron Dragon and that's enough for monsters. I guess you could add Veilers or TKR or something odd you have room but you don need many monsters in Malefics. Now you'll want to run 3 Terraforming too to get the field spell to hand, but another way to do it is simply run 3 Malefic World alongside the 3 Geartown dice you just need a field spell. Idk, both could work but World will probably get popped. Next: pot of duality. Run 3. No if ands or buts. You are not going to special summon every turn, especially when only one Malefic monster can attack or be on the field at once, and duality brings some great consistancy and helps you get to your Malefics faster. -1 tools, +1 mst, just better now. I won't make any other specific changes yet. I'll wait to see what you come up with after this